Completed Direct Mail piece

Okay...so after our on-screen critiques in class last Thursday I've made some changes to the Direct Mail piece. This project was a little on the confusing side, but it's over now and turned in to be graded (*fingers crossed*). Even though this project was a bit of a headache, in the long run it was helpful to learn and it was pretty fun as well. I am pretty pleased with the final result. What do you think? Changes? Thanks for taking a peek!